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A Valentines Sonnet

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To the one who to me gave birth,
Only to dress me in most silly frock.
You sprinkled my day with endless mirth
As trouble came as I began to walk.

To the one who read me my first book,
Who held me when i began to cry,
Watched as my first steps I took,
And never tolerated my pig sty.

To the one who I can't live without,
I'm always amazed by everything you do.
You are so incredible it makes me shout,
And our precious Kitty-Kitty would agree, too.

I hope forever these words ring true,
As I sing upon the mountains, "I love you."
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I made this for my mum for Valentines day. I realize now That i need to edit it a bit. I made two references to beginning to walk. Any suggestions?

Inoticed now that I have three more Watches than I do deviations. I've always tried to keep the number even so that means I'll be uploading a bit more now. =D
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R-U-Kidding-Me's avatar
I think it is really good as it is :)